Thursday 27 November 2014

My Story, The New Town

I haven't finished this story yet but here is what I have so far!


I was packing my bags onto the helicopter as once again I was moving to a different town where the vampire killing wasn't happening and where our school had not been burnt down. I’m Max and I live with my mum and I used to live with my dad, but something bad happened to him. I’m moving to a town called Mexigoss, mum is working in a building there owned by Mr Wolff, He was the principal of the high school and  the tallest high rise building in the town. I heard that the last locker is for me and then now I have to go to this school and Mum has just lost my dad. My father has been killed because he was a vampire like me and he was murdered by a werewolf after having a fight with Mr Jones which was the werewolf but only my family and his wife knows and his daughter Charlie has just only found out after my dad was killed by Mr Jones.


I want to believe that Werewolves, Vampires and Witches aren’t real, but they are. I was a real life Vampire, my mum didn’t know until my old girlfriend Eve told her, so I dumped Eve, and now my mum knows and my life has changed!, So I had walked into the hallway and this crazy dude walks into me and has a big cyco at me for walking into him!


“Bro watch where you're walking” said Matt, the crazy cyco kid
“No you walked into me mate, so don’t blame anything on, and don’t have a fit. So stuff of” I said back,
“WHAT is going on here”! Yelled the principal Mr Jones.
“He walked into me”, Matt told him, Once again for the second time this morning he butted in before I could talk, he did it in first period too.
“ No, sir, I didn’t walk into him, he walked into me,” I said when I had my chance,
“Both of you, My office next period!” As Mr Jones walked away.


“Stuff you” I said to Matt
“Oh well,”replied Matt, as he punched me hard in the forearm!
“OUCH!, What was that for”? I asked, Matt didn’t answer, he just kept walking.It was nearly period 2 and Matt and I have to go to Mr Jones’s office, which I was told, wasn’t a good place to be.
“Welcome, you two bad boys” Mr Jones said really creepily.
“Can I please go to the bathroom please sir”? I asked
“No! you two know why you're in here talking to me” he said very slowly.
“:Okay then bossy butt” said Matt.
“MATT” yelled Mr Jones, “Don’t call me that, you know have 60 minutes of service instead of 30 minutes.
I snickered under my breath as Matt had gotten into trouble again.
“Max you can leave now, you have a warning since you are new to this school” said Mr Jones as soon as I was walking out the door.
In my first period I had to find the art class because this was my favorite subject and the teacher is Mrs Caroline, she is from France and is really good at art so she is my art teacher.


As I was walking to Art class I ran into Matt again, but this time he wasn’t mean or anything like that he just said
“Hey Matt sorry about before, I was wrong I shouldn't of said that about you and do you want to be friends? Matt had all of a sudden started to be nice like a bully at my old school, I didn’t know what was happening then but now I know. I was walking into Art class i spotted a really cute girl that is like blonde hair with red eyes, which mean she is like me a Vampire, because I have Blonde hair and Red eyes, I went down to sit next to her when I noticed something really strange, she hadn’t been bitted yet, so now was my chance to get her find out her name and then bit her for her to become a Vampire and stay with me forever for at least five thousand years. Eventually I found her in the courtyard sitting alone on a bench eating what looks like some lollies, I ran over to her and sat down next to her. She had recognized me from art class.
“Hey aren't you Max from art class?” she asked. I hadn't answered her until after a long ten seconds.
“Well yeah, but I haven't got  your name yet?, What is your name?
“Well I’m Charlie Jones” I’m Mr Jones’s daughter, My mum is a vampire that was like your dad, but my mother had told me that your father had been slain and killed, I’m very sorry to hear that news” Said Charlie. I wasn’t listening but all I was do was staring at her beautiful eyes, she had the reddest eyes ever!


I saw Charlie out in town that afternoon I said hi and then she looked at me weirdly, then I noticed that she was walking over to, and then she took me behind aisle wall that she has made which was very impressive., anyway she took me in and then she said, “Bite Me Please I like you!” I was thinking in my head, What do I do??
“Max! Are you listening?” whispered Charlie,
“yeah yeah I’m listening but I don’t think it is a good idea to bite you though” I say back
“Yes I don’t care if my dad knows, I won’t tell a single living soul” says Charlie, I make a run for it, she ran after me around the town which is very big, Charlie was a fast runner and was catching up to me very quickly, thanks to god I know parkour and then went up on the high school roof that i the highest roof. Then at that notice Charlie was already there staring at my, so I did what she wanted, I bite her neck. I told her that she has less than 24 hours until she is 104 years old and dead but can be seen and can be heard.

I was lying in bed that night with Charlie lying beside me in another house, I was thinking what happens if she get out of control, I’ll have to kill her and I didn't want to do that to her, I love her and she likes me, I was thinking of asking her out tomorrow. The next day I didn’t see Charlie walking to school, which was really strange, but her dad was killed last night by another vampire that was very close with my dad, he had been told by our master to kill him at midnight last night, I was getting a feeling in my stomach that she had told her mum. That day Charlie had turned up to school at 12pm during lunch I spotted he and walked over to her, and then I told her” I was thinking about you last night, would you like to come and see a movie with me tomorrow??” after I asked her it was a very long awkward silence

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